28. Juli 202023. August 2021 von wolfgang

Aus Federn

Aus Federn möcht‘ ich fließen,
wär‘ gern geflügelt‘ Wort,
in Seelen mich ergießen
und sein beschützend‘ Hort.

Ach könnt‘ er mich so setzen,
dass ich ein Lichtstrahl bin.
Mit Hoffnung gar benetzend,
ergäb‘ ich einen Sinn.

3 Antworten auf „Aus Federn“

Nati sagt:
4. Juli 2019 um 17:40 Uhr
Hallo Wolfgang.
Ein sehr schönes tief gehendes Gedicht.
Möchte doch so mancher Sätze formulieren die bleiben.
(In der dritten Zeile die Wörter ‚und sein‘ in die Vierte setzen. So reimt es sich schöner. ?
LG, Nati
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1. wolfgang sagt:
  4. Juli 2019 um 18:29 Uhr
  danke nati…erledigt…
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  1. Nati sagt:
    4. Juli 2019 um 18:35 Uhr
    ?
    Sieht direkt stimmiger aus.
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